Title: Colleges should lower tuition costs Purpose: Persuade the audience to to see that tuition prices are too high for students and want to help change them lo a lower cost Thesis: Tuition costs are way too expensive for students to afford and taking out many loans hurts students in the future when trying to pay them off and living a comfortable life. Hook: Do you hate paying so much money just to go to school to be able to pursue your dream job? Introduction: Many students are in debt or paying off many loans after college when they are still looking for a real job and trying to put food on the table. The average price of tuition in the United States for out of state residents is $25,620 per year. That goes over $100,000 for four years and many students don't have that to pay for college. Transition: We will now look at some negative side effects of high tuition prices Body Main point 1 Debt A us news article states that is takes are 20 years to pay off c...
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