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Reflection of my paper from peer reviews

After giving feedback to my peers I realized that I could use some of the feedback myself.  For example, for both of my peers papers I told the to check the in-text citations.  After talking to Mr. Paudel I realized my in-text citations were also wrong.  The correct way for an in-text citation is (last name, year, p.) after realizing this I fixed my own paper.


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