Title: Colleges should lower tuition costs
Purpose: Persuade the audience to to see that tuition prices are too high for students and want to help change them lo a lower cost
Thesis: Tuition costs are way too expensive for students to afford and taking out many loans hurts students in the future when trying to pay them off and living a comfortable life.
Hook: Do you hate paying so much money just to go to school to be able to pursue your dream job?
Introduction: Many students are in debt or paying off many loans after college when they are still looking for a real job and trying to put food on the table. The average price of tuition in the United States for out of state residents is $25,620 per year. That goes over $100,000 for four years and many students don't have that to pay for college.
Transition: We will now look at some negative side effects of high tuition prices
Body
Main point 1
Debt
- A us news article states that is takes are 20 years to pay off college loans
- this means you will be well into your 40s still trying to pay off college
- can be a major stressor if you have kids of your own you have to pay for and adult bills like phone, housing, cable etc
- having loans that long can be hard to keep up with especially if you don't have a high paying job
- This adds extra stress in your life that you don't need
- 70% of students are in debt after college with many loans to pay off
- After college you should worry about getting a job not paying for loans
- Interest rates will have you paying more money
Main Point 2
Paying for college
- Students going into college are usually 18 so they only have 2 years prior to college to be able to work at minimum wage
- having a minimum wage job for 2 years will barley pay for 1 full year at college
- Working in college is hard since you have to focus on school since you are taking out so many loans and paying so much money for it
- Universitys should want students to focus on classes instead of money
Main Point 3
Thinking about how to pay for college can make you stressed
- Having student figure out a way to pay for college can be very stressful for a young adult
- having so many things on your mind can hurt your mental state
- in college what can add to stress is money, classes, tests, housing and much more
Main point 4
A lot of people can not go to college
- Many people can not even afford to go to college at all
- college is getting so expensive that many people do not have the chose of receiving a higher education to get a well paying job or get their dream job
- only 16% of low income college students actually graduate and that is a very sad rate
- Everyone should get the chance to go to college
Solution
- make a proposal to sent to the college itself to opt out of random Fees..(rec, mental health Etc)
Why this solution will help
- students will be able to focus on the reason they are in college.. School not how they will be able to pay for college
https://learningenglish.voanews.com/a/politicians-suggest-ways-to-reduce-tuition/3175263.html
https://www.voanews.com/a/universities-focus-on-low-income-students-who-dont-graduate/4104493.html
https://www.usnews.com/news/blogs/data-mine/2014/10/07/student-loan-expectations-myth-vs-reality
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