Allie Wendell’s Rhetoric Blog

Intro 1)      Hook- Have you ever been so happy about getting a new phone but when you got it you realize it is not as great as you thought?  2)      Thesis (include Purpose and effectiveness)- Samsung created this commercial to show all the negative aspects about the iPhone throughout the years to show superior features of Samsung compared to the iPhone. This commercial is effective because it exposes the frustration of an iPhone owner since they can relate to these problems. This fulfills the purpose of the commercial. Body Paragraph 1)      Main points for purpose a)      Audience i)       The audience is iPhone users.  ii)      Samsung wants iPhone users to relate to this commercial to persuade them into switching to the galaxy. b)     Characters dress casually like everyday people.     ...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R59TevgzN3k For my commercial I chose to use a commercial by Samsung. The purpose of this commercial is to persuade you to switch your phone to the Samsung galaxy.  The commercial is making fun of apple iPhones to show that theirs is the better phone.  The audience for this commercial is for people around the ages 12+, or people who are buying phones.  For ethos, the people in the commercial dress in casual everyday clothes to make it of a commercial for everyone.  It is a very simple commercial that does not really involve emotion.   The two people in the commercial are friends but one has a Samsung galaxy and one has an iPhone. The commercial shows a few years of both the Samsung galaxy and apple phones giving a summary on how both phones looked or worked.  Through each generation of phones Samsung is kind of pinpointing the bad parts about the iPhones and the main problems people hate about iPhones....

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The Role of Writing in Political Science Strengths: 1) Different paragraphs for Academic/nonacademic sources.  2) used SLR 3) sites sources correctly Weaknesses: 1) very repetitive 2) not much information from the interview 3) There was not a big explanation after quotes Writing in Psychology Strengths: 1)interviews 2 people. 2)some  explanations  after quotes 3) sited sources (even if not in correct format) Weaknesses: 1) incorrect font. 2) no cover page. 3)not enough pages/sources Writing as a Creative Writer Strengths: 1) separated academic/nonacademic sources 2) had sub-subtitles so you knew what they were talking about 3) well written explanations Weaknesses: 1) used quotes in the conclusion 2) pages numbered wrong 3) sub-subtitles not centered Writing in the Field of Economics Strengths: sources cites correctly 2) organized fairly well 3) conclusion wraps up the paper well Weaknesses: 1) Wrong font 2) first few paragra...