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The Role of Writing in Political Science
Strengths: 1) Different paragraphs for Academic/nonacademic sources.  2) used SLR 3) sites sources correctly
Weaknesses: 1) very repetitive 2) not much information from the interview 3) There was not a big explanation after quotes
Writing in Psychology
Strengths: 1)interviews 2 people. 2)some explanations after quotes 3) sited sources (even if not in correct format)
Weaknesses: 1) incorrect font. 2) no cover page. 3)not enough pages/sources
Writing as a Creative Writer
Strengths: 1) separated academic/nonacademic sources 2) had sub-subtitles so you knew what they were talking about 3) well written explanations
Weaknesses: 1) used quotes in the conclusion 2) pages numbered wrong 3) sub-subtitles not centered
Writing in the Field of Economics
Strengths: sources cites correctly 2) organized fairly well 3) conclusion wraps up the paper well
Weaknesses: 1) Wrong font 2) first few paragraphs you weren't sure if it was an intro or regular body paragraph 3) repetitive
The Role of Writing in Engineering 
 Strengths: 1) used creative ways of breaking up paragraphs 2) the paper flows nicely 3) talks about types of writing that an engineer does
Weaknesses:1) unnecessary whole letter in the beginning 2) incorrect page numbers 3) APA format is not clear
Writing in the Business Discipline
Strengths: 1) uses quotes well 2) separates body paragraphs 3) correctly cited
Weaknesses: 1) doesn't use enough sources 2) not a lot of information used from the interview 3)  the paper is choppy

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