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Commercial Post

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R59TevgzN3k
For my commercial I chose to use a commercial by Samsung. The purpose of this commercial is to persuade you to switch your phone to the Samsung galaxy.  The commercial is making fun of apple iPhones to show that theirs is the better phone.  The audience for this commercial is for people around the ages 12+, or people who are buying phones.  For ethos, the people in the commercial dress in casual everyday clothes to make it of a commercial for everyone.  It is a very simple commercial that does not really involve emotion.   The two people in the commercial are friends but one has a Samsung galaxy and one has an iPhone. The commercial shows a few years of both the Samsung galaxy and apple phones giving a summary on how both phones looked or worked.  Through each generation of phones Samsung is kind of pinpointing the bad parts about the iPhones and the main problems people hate about iPhones.  While doing this they are showing how the Samsung galaxy have always been better. For logos, the commercial is problem/solution.   At the end of the commercial the main actor gets a new galaxy and the tell you to upgrade to a galaxy.  This would be the solution to the iPhone "problem".  In this commercial there is not much speaking.  It mainly is just a visual commercial, so you can see for yourself that Samsung is better. One visual that helps this be a successful commercial is when they fall into the watch and you have to put the iPhone in rice but the galaxy works fine since its waterproof.

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