Title: Colleges should lower tuition costs Purpose: Persuade the audience to to see that tuition prices are too high for students and want to help change them lo a lower cost Thesis: Tuition costs are way too expensive for students to afford and taking out many loans hurts students in the future when trying to pay them off and living a comfortable life. Hook: Do you hate paying so much money just to go to school to be able to pursue your dream job? Introduction: Many students are in debt or paying off many loans after college when they are still looking for a real job and trying to put food on the table. The average price of tuition in the United States for out of state residents is $25,620 per year. That goes over $100,000 for four years and many students don't have that to pay for college. Transition: We will now look at some negative side effects of high tuition prices Body Main point 1 Debt A us news article states that is takes are 20 years to pay off c...
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Course Requirement: Extortion-1 Weakness:not really any solution only suggestions, used a lot of confusing information Strength: Uses good statistics, Shows how this is a problem Nuclear power-3 Weakness: Did not make it seem like a big problem, talked about why people don't think its a problem Strength: Good use of sources, used a lot of stats Practical proposal-2 Weakness: didn't seem like a paper more of an outline, the sentence meal plans discriminate against women is very opinionated. makes your target audience only women. Strength: Sectioned off problem/solution well, good solution
College tuition should be lowered. Many students are in debt before they even start a real job or make money for themselves. Students who go to college have to take out loans and borrow money just to get an education. Tuition should be lowered so that college is affordable and students will not be drowning in debt after they complete college. Many students pay for their own college. When students start college they are around the age 18 so they would only have 2 years prior to college to work. Working 2 years at minimum wage is not enough to even pay for a year of school at most colleges. Students in college would never be able to get the funds for four years of college in that short amount of time. Why should students have to pay $100,000+ just for an education? This is important because 70% of students are in debt with many loans after college. On average it takes people 21 years to pay off their student loans. This means that you will still be ...
This assignment asks us to come up with a problem to solve, and use rhetorical devices to create an argument to persuade the class to want to solve the problem. This speech has to be around 5-8 minutes. We also need to come up with a solution, the proposal needs to be fair and precise. To help your presentation we need to make sure to use a power point or prezi for visual aid. The speech should make students want to help solve this problem. Question - can we use any topic - what images should our power point include
After giving feedback to my peers I realized that I could use some of the feedback myself. For example, for both of my peers papers I told the to check the in-text citations. After talking to Mr. Paudel I realized my in-text citations were also wrong. The correct way for an in-text citation is (last name, year, p.) after realizing this I fixed my own paper.
What does research say about eating breakfast Allie Wendell The University of Iowa Introduction How does eating breakfast effect your day? There are many known benefits of eating breakfast that researches have been studying for a long time. Eating breakfast is important for many reasons. When you sleep you are not eating for about seven to eight hours and since breakfast is the first meal of the day, it helps replenish all the nutrients and glucose you could have lost overnight. Breakfast also can help keep you energized for most of the day, so you are focused and ready for whatever tasks you need to complete. Not eating breakfast can have some effects on your daily activities. If you do not eat breakfast, you could be too tired to get through all your tasks for the day or not focused enough for these tasks. Many people think that eating breakfast means eating things like pancake...
Authors Name Academic performance dependent on eating breakfast What is defined as breakfast What percentage of teenagers eat breakfast Other Info Gr Gregory W. Phillips https://files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/EJ876514.pdf “The data revealed that 65.5 percent self identified they had eaten some type of breakfast. Of those that had eaten breakfast, 72.7 received a “C” or better on the test.” “ During the course of the study 188 students made an “A” on the second exam, this includes 17.7% of the students who had eaten breakfast and 9.7% of those who had not eaten breakfast.” Following the premise of the American Dietetic Association (1996) that breakfast is when you eat, not what you eat, the administrator of the exam explained that breakfast could be a Pop Tar...
My topic for this research paper is parking at universities. Then I will narrow it down to parking at the university of iowa and how it differs from other universities. This is an important topic because many people at the university of iowa complain that there is not enough parking for them and they need somewhere to park their car. To help conduct this research I will make a survey and survey student on their opinions/ if they have parking or not. This is to see the results I get back and if they are swayed one way or another. I will also conduct a few interviews to get more information on the research. Two research questions are, why is parking important for students and does parking at other universities differ from our university.
IMRaD differs from the usual argument based papers because its more of an experiment based paper. In an IMRaD paper you need the number of participants in your study, procedures, and results. With argumentative papers you usually just need sources to support you argument. The main points for an IMRaD paper is the intro, methods, results, and discussion. This differs a lot from a argumentitve paper because in in argumentative paper you just need headings and to support the argument you are trying to make. An IMRaD paper also is more of an explanation of your findings and explaining the results. The set up of the paper is also different between and IMRaD paper and an argumentative paper. For an IMRaD paper it is set up with separate paragraphs dependent on the intro methods results and discussion. Argumentative papers are set up with titles you come up with yourself and your explain your sources or argument relating to the title.
Intro 1) Hook- Have you ever been so happy about getting a new phone but when you got it you realize it is not as great as you thought? 2) Thesis (include Purpose and effectiveness)- Samsung created this commercial to show all the negative aspects about the iPhone throughout the years to show superior features of Samsung compared to the iPhone. This commercial is effective because it exposes the frustration of an iPhone owner since they can relate to these problems. This fulfills the purpose of the commercial. Body Paragraph 1) Main points for purpose a) Audience i) The audience is iPhone users. ii) Samsung wants iPhone users to relate to this commercial to persuade them into switching to the galaxy. b) Characters dress casually like everyday people. ...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R59TevgzN3k For my commercial I chose to use a commercial by Samsung. The purpose of this commercial is to persuade you to switch your phone to the Samsung galaxy. The commercial is making fun of apple iPhones to show that theirs is the better phone. The audience for this commercial is for people around the ages 12+, or people who are buying phones. For ethos, the people in the commercial dress in casual everyday clothes to make it of a commercial for everyone. It is a very simple commercial that does not really involve emotion. The two people in the commercial are friends but one has a Samsung galaxy and one has an iPhone. The commercial shows a few years of both the Samsung galaxy and apple phones giving a summary on how both phones looked or worked. Through each generation of phones Samsung is kind of pinpointing the bad parts about the iPhones and the main problems people hate about iPhones....
The Role of Writing in Political Science Strengths: 1) Different paragraphs for Academic/nonacademic sources. 2) used SLR 3) sites sources correctly Weaknesses: 1) very repetitive 2) not much information from the interview 3) There was not a big explanation after quotes Writing in Psychology Strengths: 1)interviews 2 people. 2)some explanations after quotes 3) sited sources (even if not in correct format) Weaknesses: 1) incorrect font. 2) no cover page. 3)not enough pages/sources Writing as a Creative Writer Strengths: 1) separated academic/nonacademic sources 2) had sub-subtitles so you knew what they were talking about 3) well written explanations Weaknesses: 1) used quotes in the conclusion 2) pages numbered wrong 3) sub-subtitles not centered Writing in the Field of Economics Strengths: sources cites correctly 2) organized fairly well 3) conclusion wraps up the paper well Weaknesses: 1) Wrong font 2) first few paragra...
1) https://www.businessnewsdaily.com/5268-women-entrepreneur-challenges.html This link is a news article about seven things women entrepreneurs have to face and overcome. It is a informative non-fictunal article. It is also a non-academic article and I will use it to show the difference between academic and non-academic types of business papers. It will also be good information on how non-academic papers are worded or structured. 2) http://web.b.ebscohost.com.proxy.lib.uiowa.edu/bsi/pdfviewer/pdfviewer?vid=14&sid=9e545bb3-00c2-4996-b4d6-4e402c2f7ecb%40sessionmgr101 This link is a commentary on transformative marketing in the next 20 years. This is also a non-fictunal genre. This paper is an Academic example of how professionals in the business world write. There is a lot of helpful information on wording in this article to use to back up my academic source for this paper. 3) http://zimmer.csufresno.edu/~sasanr/Teaching-Ma...
My first paper is about our own majors. We will interview someone who is more advanced in the field but we will also use articles and resources to understand more about the way papers our written in our majors. Many majors will use a different writing style dependent on what the point they need to get across is. This is more of an informational paper to understand the different types and styles of writing professionals are using in a certain field. Many of my English classes were very different than this. Our papers would either be about books we have read, politics, or real world events. I do believe this is a very good paper to write because it informs you on what and how you be writing in the profession you choose. Three questions about this assignment What does the goal 'Give your more information about the discipline of your interest mean'? Where will we find the three non-academic/academic writings? Can my interviewee be my dad?
Rhetoric is the art of effective or persuasive speaking or writing. In rhetoric speeches can be argumentative or speaking about something your passionate about. I believe that in speeches and papers in rhetoric you are trying to get your point across.